Preparing for the coming week full of production, my
pre-production list includes an outline of my content that I will follow as I
put all of my work together. As follows, is introduction and closing, along
with a main idea and supporting ideas for each of my three body paragraphs.
Opening
This opening section will have a fairly detailed
introduction of the Joint Strike Fighter program, its history, its importance,
and a brief introduce about how I will be talking about the faults in the F-35
solution to the program.
Body 1
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F-35 is not a capable fighter in the modern
world
o
F-35 was
beat by an F-16 in a dog fight – This evidence proves that older, current,
4th generation planes, are beating new planes like the F-35 in dog
fights, and quotes from the pilots show the deficits of the plane and why it
won’t be a top-dog fighter. This will be used to prove that the plane will not
be a good military craft for the future of the US, and will end up being
dangerous for the airmen.
o
Previous
planes (F-4, F-117) that used advanced or stealth technology have been shot
down and defeated due to their reliance on technology – Planes like the
F-4, which relied on missiles and had no gun, and the F-117, which was shot
down even though it was a stealth craft, proves that a reliance on technology
to protect and advance warfare is dangerous and could lead to unnecessary
deaths and ultimately lead to defeat of our Air Force.
Body 2
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F-35 is way over budget and is going to cost
billions more
o
Budgetary
proposal shows it cost $11 billion this year, compared to less than a billion
for most other military programs – The budget proposal for this year and last year show the
program costing $11 billion compared to many other program mostly less than $2
billion, showing how much money I being dedicated to this program. This shows
that the program is costing a huge amount of money, and when adding up the
years budgets, this program is far over the proposed budget for this F-35.
o
Predictions
think that the program will continue to cost many billions more –
Predictions from several different sources, show that while the program is
advancing, the upgrades necessary to keep the initial planes relevant is going
to cost a huge, and each plane costs more now, so we may get less planes for
more money. Adding this to the project will show how the program has been an
economic failure so far, and will continue failing in the future.
Body 3
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F-35 could be made obsolete soon
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New drones
out from Russia and plans from China are intended to overwhelm and fight
specifically stealth fighters being made now – There is an anti-F-35 drone
being made by the Russian intended to remove its capabilities and shoot it down
at a much lower price. This shows that a reliance on expensive manned craft for
the future could be a huge gamble which we will lose.
o
Radar
technology has improved enough to remove the advantage of stealth – New advances
in radar and information processing could make even the best stealth useless in
the near future. This proves that all of the work being put into the plane to
make it stealthy at the cost of other features could be useless a few years
from now.
Closing
This closing section will be about summing up the terrible
idea that is the F-35. Including a few ideas about what the future may hold for
the program. This will also go into wrapping up how the terrible ideas should
be considered by the audience as a full overview of the program and they should
leave knowing more facts about the program and better informed.
Hey Alexander,
ReplyDeleteI know this is kinda late but I'm catching up on blog posts. Anyways, for one of my peer review posts I provided an outlining suggestion for you project. That sugestion can be found here. I basically say that you should, form the beginning, state what your public argument is so the reader knows exactly what you advocating for before you start going in to the body sections.