A project's sources are the basis of its factual accuracy and especially when it comes to an argumentative project, is key to its success. When developing a list of resources, you must assess its author, reliability, relevancy to the project, and the audience or purpose of the article. What follows, is a list of ten of my primary sources for my own project, with these factors in mind.
1. Aaron
Mehta’s article on defensenews.com titled, The Current Status of the F-35, in
Three Charts, is an article dedicated to bringing attention to the current
state of the F-35 Joint Strike Program, because it incorporates detailed
graphics which show the audience lots of information, and also includes a very
detailed title, leading audience interested in aerospace to choose this
article. Living in the Intercepts category of the website, this group is
designated as the current news portion of the website, not filled with opinion
pieces, but rather works that try to bring facts and ideas to the audience, one
that is interested in the latest news and cares about aerospace. The other fact
is, that anyone following the website defensenews is interested in military
defense, which is another commonality this article shares with my own project,
which makes me think it will be a valuable asset to my guide. The author, Aaron
Mahta, an up and coming writers who is specialized in defense and pentagon
related activities, as seen on his Linkedin and former employers description
page also fits a fairly reliable category or sources, as while this author is
not very experienced, he has had published work in popular websites such as CNN
or Politico, and also has a history of scholarly work which leads me to believe
he is invested and truthful in this field. Seeing as Mahta includes specific
aircraft terminology and condensed work with a detailed structure, this type of
source will be valuable for the quick reference guide I’m writing.
2. Zachary Cohen’s article titled,
The F-35: Is the world’s most expensive weapons program worth it?, questions
the value of the F-35 fighter program as it stands in the current day. Meant to
convince the audience to see that the program was a waste, it uses background
history of the program and controversial quotes to generate support for the
fact that the program is way over budget and decidedly a terrible idea in the
first place. Based on the website of CNN, a very popular news source, the
audience could be anyone surfing the news or interested in the military and
aerospace, as can be seen when the article goes into the background of the
program, giving detailed descriptions of the plane, its purpose, and the
procedure in the military purchasing a new aircraft. It is also presented to
more open audience when the article turns more political as it calls out
politicians supporting the military-industrial complex to keep this program
funded. Cohen himself, a video producer at CNN, a major broadcasting network
who is know for being a popular and reliable source of news, seems decently
credible as a relatively new media creator seen on his linkedin, but with up to
six years of experience in the journalism field, his background seems dedicated
to finding and reporting on stories. While this may also bring in lots of
opinion to controversial pieces such as this one, his CNN profile also depicts
him as gaining lots of experience in the field of military journalism,
discussing other planes, wars, and military issues. This type of credibility is
also seen in the article as it discusses several different points of contention
on the F-35, ranging from political, to technological, to the sheer number of
the budget being spent. The article also bringing in many outside sources, such
as former airmen who flew the craft, to support his argument, which will
valuable in a report such as mine.
3. David Axe’s article titled, Test PilotAdmits the F-35 Can’t Dogfight, is an article intended to shoot down the ideas
that the brand new F-35 program is an improvement over the older technology and
aircraft we fly today. Writing and quoting a test pilot in a mock fight between
an old F-16 and the new F-35, Axe pulls the key information from the write-up
paper that he acquired, which in essence shows the aircraft does not have the
energy management and turning ability to beat older craft in a close quarters
fight. By combining these quotes, along with in depth explanation as to the
real effects these types of issues present in a dogfighting scenario, Axe’s
article sufficiently argues to the audience on the failures of the F-35. The
audience, a generic composition of avid internet followers who are following
Medium.com, a social journalism site, it is easy to tell that this opinion
piece that also brings facts to the table is designed to sway an interested but
less knowledgeable audience who is interested in government reports. Similar to
twitter, in showing the top articles that are recommended by other site users,
this article is meant to generate interest towards an excitable audience which
is exactly what this article provides. While the site doesn’t lend itself to
credibility, the author makes up for it with his extensive time freelance
writing seen on his linkedin, and his plethora of plane focused writing he has
accomplished for medium.com, as seen on his profile there. This type of focused
and specialized writing and opinion is the type needed when showing off the
negative aspects of the F-35 program.
4. Kwame Holman’s report titled, Pentagon’sF-35 Fighter Under Fire in Congress, is a report dedicated to weighing to pros
and cons of the newer fighter program coming from the Pentagon. As the article
discusses both the technological advances, such as advanced stealth coating,
and weighs them against the logistical issues it may face relying on one
manufacturer, the article focuses on discussing the programs value as a whole.
Not focusing on the good or the bad too much, the article also includes many
different opinions, some from military personnel, others from journalists and
staffers, intended to lets the very broad audience that listen to PBS, a public
broadcasting station, make up their own opinions after facing both for and
against factual arguments. This large audience is also helped by the use of
video, which makes the interviews and facts flow much quicker, coming with
visual display and audio that let a broad audience get through the thick
material quicker. Holman, a veteran correspondent for PBS has a long history of
reporting on congressional and military issues, starting a career in his
position in the early 1980s, as seen on his PBS page. These two facts, the
length of his career and his focus on congressional issues, especially on a
news based site such as PBS, leads me to believe that the author is credible
and will provide valuable information. The article itself, giving me valuable
quotes from a major general in the military, and also examine both positive and
negative aspects, which allows me to create better counter-arguments, will be
invaluable to the guide I am creating.
5. Clyde Haberman’s report titled, Despite Decades of Stealth, Sticking Points Bedevil F-35 Jet, is intended to emphasis
the growing pains of the new F-35 jet. Citing past issues with previous stealth
fighters such as the F-117 Nighthawk, and citing Senator McCain’s disapproval
of the program for its cost overruns as its previous positive aspects of
sharing parts goes down the drain, Haberman addresses all of the issues the
F-35 has faced so far and summed them up in one comprehensive article designed
to inform and perhaps argue for alternative to the F-35 program. Appearing on
the New York Times, the premier paper in the world, the name already gives this
article credibility, as anything the times puts out must be checked over by
skilled editors. Also, the article itself, sites more than ten sites for the
reader to visit, giving it credibility by backing up its claims with data.
Haberman, the author, is also a veteran at the Times, has historied career of
covering both foreign affairs, and domestic issues which fit his style of
article, where he targets “hypocrisy and unfairness.” This type history is what
gives a writer credibility and ethos. Following a long running analogy of David
and Goliath, this article also includes various outside resources to complement
the comprehensive article which will allow me to find even more factual data
for my guide.
6. David Cenciotti’s article titled, ‘Vega 31’: The First and Only F-117 Stealth Fighter Jet Shot Down In Combat (15 Years Ago Today), is an
article meant to inform the reader about the shooting down of an F-117 stealth
fighter. You can tell this because of the articles focus on one specific event,
a plane downing, and also because it focuses on the importance of why this
stealth plane downing is so different from other plane crashes, going into
detailed how it was destroyed. This article, on a site named the Aviationist,
and based around a stealth fighter, is meant for an audience which is
interested in the aerospace field. David Cenciotti, is a journalist focused on
the aerospace field, focusing on military aircraft, and also has created one of
the biggest aviation magazines on the internet, and is therefore a reliable
author. This article will help my project by highlighting the fact that
previous stealth aircraft have been shot down, and will also show that outside
factors can destroy the higher technology built into a plane, such as Serbian
coordination into air defense.
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7. This report, titled Program Acquisition Cost by Weapon System, put out by the Pentagon’s Office of the
Under Secretary of Defense is inherently reliable as it comes directly from the
source of the military’s headquarters, and is also an important document meant
to accurately report military funding requests. The audience is obvious, meant
for a request to Congress and the full Secretary of Defense to look over, seen
in the budgetary quotes, and the categories fits to a format dedicated as a
presentation of a budget. The source is trying to sell the budget to the
audience, specifying each and every part of the budgets work, and going into
detail how each program is valuable, such as saying how the Joint Strike
Fighter program is a next generation fighter, showing how it is the future of
the Air Force. This source will help my project
by giving a reliable report of the programs expenditure and also by showing how
little other programs are getting in comparison to the strike fighter program.
8. This book titled, Striving for Air Superiority, written
by Craig C. Hannah, is dedicated to teaching about the lack of proper training
and various tactics used by fighter aircraft post-WW2. Talking about various
techniques, such as the straffing technique, and including technical terms,
such as chaff, this book is meant to be read by people interested in military
combat, aviation, or former service members. Published by Texas A&M
University, and including various sources from pilots who flew the aircraft and
outside books and reports on air combat, the book is reliable in reporting military
history and warfare. While little is known to the public about Craig C. Hannah,
being publish my a university and having various sources makes up for this
apparent lack of credibility. Establishing opinon based analysis of the
situations airmen faced in Vietnam and Korea, the author uses both quotes from
pilots and logic based discourses on situations using tables of data to support
his opinion, in order to show that there were mistakes made by the instructors
and leader of the Air Force during that time period, and that various
technological advances were used improperly and led to further plane losses.
This type of opinion supports my project by showing that new technology doesn’t
always make a plane better. Using the specific point of the F4 and its lack of
a gun in its initial versions, this led to its loses to Vietnamese Aircraft on
a few occasions. This, along with his opinion on improper training also help
with my suggestion that the F-35 won’t be the game changing plane people make
it out to be.
9. David Axe’s article titled, China, Russia Could Make U.S. Stealth Tech Obsolete, focuses on the struggle that brand new U.S. stealth
technology may face when put up against newer countermeasure designed to
destroy the stealth advantage. Axe, already established as a credible writer in
my third source, is writing an opinion piece on how technology advancements
made by other countries might make U.S. stealth technology less viable, using
both quotes such as from Barry Watts, an analyst for the Center for Strategic
and Budgetary Assessments in Washington, and also pointing to specific enemies,
such as China and Russia, who have developed better radar which could make
planes like the F-35 obsolete. On a magazine, Wired, which is dedicated to
advancements in technology, this article is dedicated to audiences interested
in current events, technology, the type of audience who would be drawn in by a
picture of advanced bomber at the top of the page or pulled in by keywords like
“obsolete.” This article will help my project by showing how the future could
hold advances that make huge projects like the F-35 worthless, and also acts as
a follow up on the writer David Axe, who posted one of the original skepticisms
of the F-35.
10. Without author, this Economist
article titled, The last manned fighter, is an article that is designed to
bring up good questions about the F-35 program, and introduce facts to the
audience that might make them consider similar questions about the Joint Strike
Fighter Program. Filled with detailed graphs and specific detailed about both
the budget and specification of the program, this article, placed on the
Economist, a magazine that brings about an audience interested in the economy,
current events, large programs, and large business, is meant to show how the
program itself has many aspects about it that could lead to failure. Printed on
the Business section of the economists, this article is already designed to
draw in a different audience that will judge this program from a business
perspective, seeing it as a failing project for Lockheed Martin that will only
cost the government money. Even without the author, this article published on a
well-known economic paper, has so many references to the specific details of
the programs, such as build numbers, costs, potential future costs, that it
uses logic to enhance the reliability of its argument. Coming from a different
perspective of the business sector, and introducing new graphs and tables of
data, this article will be valuable to my project in bring a different audience’s
opinion and provided information for my reference guide.
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